As Douglas Coupland once said "It's embryonic in my head, but it's conceived. I don't want to discuss it for fear of screwing up the zygote." lol. But I'll discuss it a little. I want it to focus on Dally and Tim and how they are with each other and what happens with them regarding betrayal and women and their criminal lifestyles. I'm having an issue because I can already tell my OFC wants a bigger part of the story than she deserves lol. She's integral to the whole "betrayal" part of things, so she needs to be in the story. I wanted to tell it mostly from a 3rd person limited POV from Tim and maybe Dally, but I'm thinking to show them more, her 3rd person POV might work better for the "as others see us" kind of view. I just don't want her to take over the story at all...I'm afraid of it because I've given her a background and everything and it makes me want to use it more lol. I've decided she's an Aquarius (with a Scorpio moon and Sagittarius rising...yeah, I spend too much time on these things lol). That makes her birthday February 2nd 1948, 3:33am. The story is set in 1966, anywhere from March to August or so...I haven't decided. It's in the same timeframe as Middle Ground took place. I realized in my research that Tim is a year older than Dally. Dally was 17 (turning 18 in November) but he died before his 18th birthday. Tim was 18 (turning 19 in November). I don't know why, but I always thought of them as the same age until I noticed that.  Tags: astrology, my fan fiction Current Music: Pink Floyd - Hey You
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